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What a story. Good job.
08/31/06
What I really loved about this story is once you found out about the baby, you had settled in your heart that he was your grandson and at the end, because of circumstances out of your control, you accepted that he was Melody's child. Great Story :O) God Bless, Kaye
09/01/06
My heart aches for you. I pray that you can see your grandson again someday, but applaud your acceptance of the reality of the situation. May God be with you.
Such a heart-wrenching story and so beautifully told.
09/01/06
How sad. But a comment on our times. I couldn't stop reading it.
09/02/06
What a sad ending really wish there are better and brighter days ahead for you and your grandchild. Good job.
09/03/06
This story reminds me of the prodigal son. Both Melody and Steven are prodigals. It sounds like the baby may have granparents on both sides praying for him. May your prayers continue to uphold them until they run back into the arms of their heavenly Father.
09/06/06
A very touching story. Your acceptance of the circumstances is commendable. Just keep praying; your grandson may be in your arms once again.
09/07/06
Oh! My heart broke after reading this story. How touching and sad! It seems time marches on, doesn't it?