The Official Writing Challenge
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This story was so precious. . .much like that rose of which you wrote. Miracle "blossoms" can come from Heaven to earth in the worst war-ravaged places. Thanks for reminding us!
08/09/06
A nice story, but I'm not sure I like the idea of the father making the rose bloom, rather than God. But, it was nicely written and touching.
08/10/06
The essence of your story is beautiful. And what you have written, you did well. I would have liked to of known some of the details that surrounded your story. I'll be looking forward to reading more from you as you progress. You have talent. God bless.
So touching! Good writing. Thanks for you comment on my challenge article.