The Official Writing Challenge
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This is an excellent writing. I enjoyed every word of it. Keep those stories coming, and I hope I will be able to recognize your writing.
Excellent story. You kept this reader's attention all the way through. Keep those good writings coming, and I hope I will recognize them so that I may be able to enjoy them as much as this one.
Sincerely, Maryolyn Payne
Great writing with a wonderful lesson. This is one of my favorites in beginners this week!
Excellent job. This is simple enough for a child to understand yet it has so many layers and Biblical parallels that an adult can really "chew" on this and get so much out of it. I think you won't be in beginners very long...You are very good at capturing that fairy tale feeling. Great writing!
I have to agree with Ann. This is one of my favorites as well - awesome job!
THis is really beautiful - very creative and well written. On a technical note, I think the first paragraph needs just a tiny bit of tidying up - mainly punctuation work. But that was a tiny point, and this is an excellent piece. Well done.
Lisa, Congrats on your EC win! This story is very creative. I was captivated. Well done.
Go Lisa Go! Way to write - #1 in beginners, Congrats!
WOW, that was great. Very creative and heartbreaking. I loved it!
Hi Lisa,
I enjoyed this story very much. It was simple but creative enough to make us reflect on the book of Genesis a bit more. You deserve to win. Congratulations!
Great story and reminder that we are to be what God created us to be. Congrats!