The Official Writing Challenge
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08/04/06
A great reality check for all of us covetous folks (I'm certainly one of them at times!!). I would suggest, to make this easier to read, breaking up your second paragraph into a several paragraphs, instead of just one. You've got lots of different ideas there in one long paragraph. Great message - thanks for sharing it with us!