The Official Writing Challenge
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Frightening. You hear stories like this from time to time, just enough to know they are true. It is a fearful thing to fall into the hands of the living God.
It's a story that needs telling. Great work!
Quite Sobering! Thanks for the reminder that all that glitters is not gold.
You conversations within the story are amazing. Through it you feel very connected to your characters. Great job!
A sobering story. Your dialgoue is great and seems to reflect the pace of Gordon's lifestyle, too. Really well written...
Wow! One of my favorites so far. Hope it places.
WOW! Powerful! Makes you stop and reflect.