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Interesting article, with an underlying message. I like the analogy of the jigsaw puzzle. You fit the pieces of this together nicely.
This piece was quite good. It was well-written and creative. I really liked the paralleling of the puzzle and the picture it made with Steve and Stephen's life. Good insight. A fine job!
I really enjoyed your story. I'm so glad that God can give us peace in these types of situations.
I really like the parallels, too, between the puzzle and this man's life. A few little details bothered me, though--would a person be able to assemble a large jigsaw puzzle in a courthouse? And the penalty phase of a trial is not done at the same time as the criminal trial. Still, with a few details smoothed out, your story is inspiring and full of hope.
Pretty good stuff, like was said above, there is some difficulty with the legal aspects (I am married to an attorney). But, a mostly enjoyable read.
Very creative! Interesting read and one that is not easy to forget. Thank you for sharing.
Welcome back, Allison! Great story - great analogy.