The Official Writing Challenge
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06/11/06
A good lesson for us all! Loosen our grip and give it all to Jesus!

You may want to watch your references to the Lord and capitalize "He" or "Him" or "Me" or "My" when He is speaking!

Nice piece! :)
06/12/06
Nicely done. It seems almost poetic, in a way. Maybe put each line separate for a better effect and reading ease. Letting go - yes, we do need to do that.
06/13/06
Forgiveness does bring peace; Mark Twain said it so well..."Forgiveness is the fragrance the Violet sheds on the heel that crushed it". Nicely done.
06/15/06
This is a very sweet example of "letting go and letting God." I would suggest putting the words of God in italics instead of parantheses.
God bless!