The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed this very much...Pat
Great read! Yes, to "Glorify God" Good job!
Excellent and inspiring devotional! You have a wonderful 'inner eye,' painting a picture with words to illustrate your message.

Here are a couple of ways to make your piece even more powerful: Brevity and sizzle.
Use swift, effective brush-strokes to paint your picture, so you don't lose the reader in a sea of description for the same scene.

Sizzle is a way to help you do that. When polishing your piece, comb through it for passive verb forms like "can be seen" or "is glowing," or "that He has chosen." Put them in active form, and replace humdrum, everyday verbs with "hot" verbs.

Have fun with this, and keep writing!