The Official Writing Challenge
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Lovely poem! I enjoyed it. Keep writing!
Well done! I love your thoughts on wisdom especially. You have a great sense of rhyme, and with some attention you will begin to hear the different meters, and decide what form your poem will take. Just be sure to watch out for awkward phrases, like:
"I do not want in other people’s
quarrel, to be."
Keep writing, you've got the stuff!
Nicely done. Beautiful work. You have a way with words. Keep writing.
Good job!