The Official Writing Challenge
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I was crying by the end as well. Thank you for sharing with us. Lets keep this love circle revolving. Much blessings. Janice
05/05/06
This is a good "desperate times demand desperate measures" story. It's a sad commentary on the suspicion and fear that drives the age we are living in. Well done.
Absolutely gripping. I'm in a puddle. Few things I've read have drawn out such feelings of praise and love for my Savior as this. Love conquers all; compassion casts out fear. Faithful and True snatches one more from the pit. A dying mother's prayers answered. You showed rather than told. You have my vote!
05/11/06
This is writing that sails the reader through from beginning to end. Good character description, tension, resolution--thank you.