The Official Writing Challenge
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Wonderful until the last paragraph, the imperative 2nd. person is definant to the otherwise very well written 3rd. person statement. Make edits and send this to a Christian Writers Conference for a devotion period.
I see where you were going with the last paragraph and it seems necessary on the surface. But this piece is not a surface piece! Continue the depth until the end! I loved this perspective. One I can't beleive I haven't given much thought to, but is one so exciting to look forward to! Great job!
"Instead seek God, and in everything you do, do it to please him. For he is the one who fulfills all the desires of our heart." Beautiful, thank you!
How beautiful! I was immediately drawn into the plight of the individual to make a difference in the lives of others and the world.