The Official Writing Challenge
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I really connected with what you had to say here. I'd like to encourage you to keep at it, and make sure you proof read carefully.
There are many beautiful musings in this piece. Keep polishing, reading aloud, perfecting. Very nice.
Fulfillment...hmmmm; well, in a way it had a hodge-podge of beautiful settings, mysterious ponderings of night skies and perhaps even fulfillment for the Writer...but I, myself, didn't embrace that feeling of fulfillment. You obviously have talent for expressing your thoughts, so keep at it; great potential here. Thanks for sharing.
I enjoyed the pictures you created with your thoughts, but didn't feel a flow of ideas.
I agree, some of the things you expressed truly touched me. Please don't stop polishing; I see wonderful potential here!