The Official Writing Challenge
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I liked how your really described the temptation we as Chrsitians have. Even though heavy metal won't be a huge temptation among every Chrsitian, each one of us have our struggles and each one (if we give in) leads to spiritual death. Good job! I liked your title
I agree - great title. You've captured this character's battle very well, and given hope to anyone struggling with temptation. I would suggest you avoid starting sentences with the word "but". But other than that (yeah, I did that on purpose) this was really good! :-)
Thank you for sharing! I agree we all have temptations to face, but I think it's kind of like opening a can of worms when when we take the other route-Thanks for sharing that it is the Lord that gives us overcoming strength. Truly, it gets easier. God bless ya, littlelight