The Official Writing Challenge
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Good thoughts going on here. Maybe a few too many to stay focused though. Liked the idea that life isn't just a recreational sport, but the real deal.
In your last two sentences, you say life is not a game, and then you write to step up to the might want to re-write this with a more focused approach. Perhaps one example per paragraph? You have a lot of encouraging things to say...keep working on it!
I agree with Jan. Proof reading a few times helps us alot, especially after others point out things that we could change. Soon we notice them ourselves, and improve. I liked your thoughts and message though..Keep writing! God bless ya, littlelight
Good thoughts here. No point repeating what was said before. Thanks for sharing.