The Official Writing Challenge
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When Jesus was at his lowest, he had his place where he had to go, even alone. He even left his friend by themselves to be where he could be reached by the one who gives comfort and understanding.

Well written emotional personal story.
08/19/17
I am so sorry to hear about the loss of your husband of thirty years.

I liked the raw emotions of your mountain top experience..

The ending was so uplifting.

I may change the beginning so it is less wordy and incorporates the first two paragraphs. You may want show instead of tell.

Thank you for sharing such a painful experience into a meaningful entry.
08/22/17
I would say Amen to the confession of this beautiful memoir. Its sad but powerful. Leads us to see how we can lift our eyes from our pain and sorrow to the One who is able and willing to carry it for us. Thank you for sharing.
08/24/17
Julie, Congratulations on your 1st place finish in the beginner level.

This was a heart-warming story.

I hope to see your writing in the intermediate level.