The Official Writing Challenge
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I agree. You have wonderful points, but could have put each one into a paragraph of its own and buffed it up.
I am not sure what the title has to do with your essay, but I like your thoughts. You have much room to expound more. God bless,
Sorry guys - I misread the requirements and thought it said the max word limit was 150. The min was 150 and max 750.
How true this is - I've often agonized over this state of affairs in society today - that we are all regulated by externals instead of the Word of God. I like the way you've put this using your mother's words.