The Official Writing Challenge
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A hearty AMEN--nicely done. I enjoy the message and the mixture.
God bless ya, littlelight
The refrain should read:

Jesus is the only true vine and life line,

May Your Spirit guide and renew mine,
Good introductory paragraph: classic essay style with examples and main topic sentence.
Suggestion: The I AM statements that Jesus made concerning Himself and the list of needs of both vines and people could be stated in parallel form in paragraphs two through four. I.e. Jesus is the Living Water, vines need water, people need water; Jesus is the Bread of Life, vines need nourishment, people need food (bread).
Could Galatians 5:22-23 be somehow put into paragraph four?
This piece has so many good thoughts in it. Good job! Keep writing!
I had to read this twice. It is very unique. Not a quick read - needs to be savored. Keep writing and God Bless.