The Official Writing Challenge
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04/11/14
A good running commentary braided into scripture relevance of the world today. You did a nice job with opening up to "truths" and bringing forth your observation of society today.

I especially enjoyed the last paragraph which summed it up perfectly.

Nicely done.

God bless~
You used the word as it was meant to be used. Good for you.

You also were "irritated" by the word and its use. Good for you, twice.

I felt you did well in expressing your feelings about the word. We don't always have to use the latest and greatest new word in the dictionary to express ourselves correctly.

Keep expressing yourself and be yourself.