The Official Writing Challenge
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Loved it! WOnderful writing...thank you!

God bless~
Nice testimony piece. Just a few punctuation/spelling issues: A few sentences need a question mark added at the end. Also in one place the word faith has an 's' added to it by mistake. Also the word 'gowned' should be 'groaned'; and the word 'quite' in context should be 'quiet'.
There is a good message here. We can feel so self sufficient at times that we forget how much we need God.

You wrote, "You see He put me flat on my back." Showing us how that happened would draw the reader into the story more.

I struggle with submitting my will to God's sometimes, but you are right--that is where we find true joy.

I look forward to reading more of your work!
Lots of important messages here - thank you for this!