The Official Writing Challenge
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09/21/13
Nice take on the topic. Though it could perhaps use a few more word pictures to draw the reader in, it's well thought out and hits on nearly every point when it comes to passing the exam.

I think you're on to something here, so keep writing! I look forward to reading more.
09/22/13
I enjoyed your dialogue with God.
I read it a few times as my initial response was to think God was portrayed as a schoolmaster rather than a love filled parent -even Job (in my thinking) was 'tested' so that he Job could know himself better. To grow more in 'knowing' his Father God. To renew his mind to this effect.
But then God's mercy and grace shone through your words and I saw recognition of the need to 'know' of the holiness achieved for us in Christ and be soooo grateful. Oh how perfect. Keep it up.
This is a heartfelt plea to God that I can really relate with. You did a nice job.