The Official Writing Challenge
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I always enjoy thought provoking pieces and this is certainly one of those, and I did enjoy. I like how you took the topic and thought outside of the box, Nice job.
That was an interesting way you used a dream to move on into what you really wanted to talk about.

The devil might be considered exotic by all the changing means he approached us with temptations.

We have to ever be on guard.

Get ready for next week's writing.
08/18/13
I found your ability to verbally paint the picture of the dream amazing. I felt the power of the image. Great job!

I noticed some coma errors, but they did not distract from the content.
08/20/13
This was different and intriguing. I enjoyed it so much. Thanks.

God bless~