The Official Writing Challenge
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I really enjoyed this well written story that held my attention from beginning to end. Nicely done.

God Bless~
I really enjoyed your story of the Road Trip. It kept my interest all the way through. I thought you expressed the topic of whine in such a way that it slipped right into the story without really noticing it was the topic but simply a part of the story. Really well done.
Oh I loved this. It reminded me of when our family went on summer vacation. Oh it could be a tough ride for sure. You grabbed my attention right away and held it to the end. What an enjoyable read!
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