The Official Writing Challenge
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I loved the idea behind this story! Very well done. One bit of crit - try to stay in one tense when telling your story (Jenny bounces from past to present). Other than that, I really enjoyed this piece. Excellent!
I always enjoy a bit of speculative fiction. You didn't disappoint with your creativity. The names you chose for your characters were quite fascinating. Thanks!
I love this . . .
Thank you for stepping out of your comfort zone and writing this bit of fiction for us.
You should step out of your comfort zone more often.. You have a gift for fiction and creativity. Loved this story and the very strong message it sends. Especially the last line.

God is so good!

Thanks for sharing this wonderful story!
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