The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a really nice devotional. I truly enjoyed and could relate to the eraser in the nose part.

I noticed you had some punctuation errors, like if however is used in the middle of the sentence, commas go before and after the word. Also, the punctuation goes inside the quotation marks. You may want to get a reference book like Strunk and White's Element of Style.

It's a great book and I hope you plan to keep on writing and will use something like that because you do have a knack for writing devotions. It was a great length, the Bible verses matched your point and your message is a universal one. You did a fine job and I enjoyed it.
Really good devotional. Enjoyed the story and lesson.
Most excellent!