The Official Writing Challenge
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I think this is quite a deep piece for so few words. You had several typos that made it hard to understand. I'd be happy to help you proof your next story, just PM me if interested. I think you have a lot to say and your words could really touch someone's heart.
I'm not quite sure I understand your entry and I apologize for my ignorance. I believe it is probably a more indepth entry that I am able to understand.