The Official Writing Challenge
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WOW! This was an extremely brilliant piece. I loved this entire entry. I was taken in and read it three times. Each time, I enjoyed it more.

Clever thoughts, wrapped up in prolific truths...Powerful, and compelling. Excellent job.

Thank you.

God Bless~
This is a beautiful poetic piece. You did such a nice job with the rhymes and flow. Your message is a great one with many questions we should ask ourselves often.
Wow is the only adjective that fits this. I hope this gets picked up by a devotional book company!
This gave me a visual of a young "hip hop" poet speaking these truths in front of an audience in a crowded upbeat coffee house! It would surely bring the house down!

I would call it Christian Slam Poetry...very direct and in your face and just awesome!

Wonderful piece of prose!
Very well done! Certainly not a beginner. Good job.
Congratulations for ranking 6th in level one!