The Official Writing Challenge
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Good message and to the point. Without God we are poor...and with him we are exceedingly rich beyond our scope of understanding.

There is nothing wrong with acquiring wealth through God's blessings, but it is wrong when that is placed above Him. Beautifull said.

Great job. Thanks for this.

God bless~
This is a lovely mini-sermon. I felt like I was right there with you and you were talking just to me.

When I first opened your story, the flood of ink literally took me back. I moved my head to try and focus my eyes. You may want to hit preview before submit and proof your article again. This helps because you can see how it will look to the reader. Then you would have caught the repeating paragraph and the spots when you missed a space between words.

However, that is a tiny thing and something so many of us do the first few times we submit. Your message was on topic. The ending was strong and it resonated through me. It can never be taken from me! Those are wonderful words to remember.
Great job - I especially like the last paragraph and I am right there with you.