The Official Writing Challenge
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This was certainly interesting, not to mention quite comical, but I'm not exactly sure what happened at the end.
I was engaged throughout and was tickled to find that they were monkeys, and not so dumb ones at that.

Good job.
Quite a different take on the topic at hand...And, amusing as well. I enjoyed this short and funny story. Thank you. God Bless~
This is an interesting piece. The ending made me chuckle.

You were missing punctuation here and there in the narrative.

I love it when a writer uses a new word - invigilator. Nice job!