The Official Writing Challenge
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Beautifully told - nicely done. I loved this. Thanks and God Bless~
Well, I for one, would love to sit and hear all of Father Kelly's stories! Not only did I get a good chuckle, I enjoyed the pace of this. You had me captivated in wanting to know the moral of the story. Great job in my opinion, of lacing humor with a message of wisdom.
Excellent. The humour is beautifully judged. It can be hard to get that right without descending into silliness, but you've really achieved it with this.
This was really funny but a great message and one I really need to be reminded of. Nicely done.
I loved it. Father Kelly is a wonderful character. I think you could do much more with his character in future stories. Great job!
Very funny story about a very serious subject.

Good work!
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