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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Where Angels Fear to Tread (not about the book) (09/08/11)
Just saying
Did you hear it
I was there
Shocking

Just telling
Did you see it
Faces looking
Shameful

Just helping
Did you know
Signs pointing
Sinful

Just praying
Did you join
Show the way
Leading

Discourse
Why this prying
Darkness
Seek the light

Eyes
Why this blindness
Scales
Seek the clay

Lips
Why this speaking
Devour
Seek the coal

Ears
Why this whisper
Listen
Seek to bless

Sowing
Why this always
Planting
Seek the soil

Once
Why this continue
Reaping
Seek the seed

Plowing
Why this deeply
Generations
Seek the tree

Death
Why this stinging
Lying
Seek the truth

Angels
Why this watching
Guarding
Seek the face

Father
Why this giving
Transforming
Seek the heart

Creatures
Who this changing
Convicting
Spirit life

Repenting
Why this crying
Dying
Born anew

Angel chorus
Unison
Who this holy
Join us

Holy Holy
Bowing
Who this worthy
Savior Lord

He is holy
Tremble
Who this great
Creator God
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Date
Nancy Bucca
09/15/11
A most interesting poem, you've packed a lot of deep meaning into this. One read is not enough.
Bonnie Bowden 
09/16/11
Original poem. I liked the way it flowed. Very thought-provoking.
C D Swanson 
09/16/11
Nice job! I enjoyed it, and the way you layed it out.

My heart is partial to poems; especially poetic praise to the Lord. Beautiful! God Bless~
Shann Hall-LochmannVanBennekom 
09/17/11
This is really deep.
Lillian Rhoades 
09/17/11
Very creative. I think you may have veered from the subject a bit. Sometimes, repetition works for a poem. Although I have little expertise in that area, I'm not sure the repetitive questions added to the intent of your poem; especially the last few stanzas. Perhaps, replacing "is" for "this" where possible, would improve the "message," at least for me.:-)

We certainly do need to "guard our tongues," because someday we will face a Holy God
C D Swanson 
09/22/11
Congratulations. God bless~
Linda Goergen
09/22/11
Congratulations on a well deserved win!