The Official Writing Challenge
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This story brought tears in my eyes. you brought the message out well. Keep writing as God leads.
A sweet story indeed! Really liked the title, well done.
Beautiful story. Sara would have missed out on an opportunity to get to know someone if she had used appearances to choose her friends.
An emotional read; it will capture many readers who love a good tear-jerker!! Very well-presented - a good challenge article. Thanks for sharing it with us. God bless love from JOHN3-34 Evangelist
I really enjoy this story, you captured it very hit me at the end. God bless you ans stay the course.
Touching story with a great message. It's one of my favorites this week.
Beautiful in every way! Thank you, Allison, for this fine heart story!
Touching indeed.

My friends' daughter has Downs, and has had heart surgery ... and other surgeries ... and so I found it especially touching.

Well done.
This was very sweet. Good job.
This a great little story, Allison. You could do without the ****'s and "a few days later" things. Your story is laid out well enough that we can see the time lapses without the little introductions. Good job!
I enjoyed your story. Very good! A lot of 'really's, but I'd best go check my own before I 'really' say that! :o) Keep writing!
Allison, I was a judge this week, and I absolutely loved this story. The title really drew me in, and as the sister of a young man with Down's Syndrome, I was moved by your characters. You are a talented writer and I look forward to reading more of your stories in the future.
Great story, Alison!!! Definitely got to me - I am impressed that this was your second entry!!
Ahh, I love it!