The Official Writing Challenge
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I liked the sequel very much. I'm glad you were able to continue, so I could find out more of what happened.
I like the sequel too but my favorite part of the first story was that you didn't use a dream to make a happy ending. I would have loved this if Beth had died and the MC was resuscitated. But overall I can't complain you did a great job with the characters and the dialog. The message is one we should never forget.
This is an interesting twist on a provocative headline grabber (90 minutes in heaven, etc.) Also, I liked how you picked up the thread from a previous entry, yet it also works as a stand alone piece.