The Official Writing Challenge
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09/19/05
This is a nice poem.
It sound like rooms beening rented out from heaven,or we are meeting to receive a room the God has for us in heaven,that's what I pick-up from the poem.
09/19/05
I'm pretty sure this poem is written in the "voice" of a Gideon's Bible--am I correct?
09/19/05
Very creative and touching. I love it! Blessings.
09/20/05
heaving their voices...should this be Hearing their voices? I think it's the bible in the hotel bedside table speaking. original.
09/20/05
Very thought-provoking because of the good imagery!
I like the poem very much - nice use of imagary, and I love the way you weave the Word. Expresses nicely how God is trying to reach out to everyone of us. Will enjoy re-reading this. God bless.