The Official Writing Challenge
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It was a thrilling story with so much detail.

The ending was kind of sudden and not quite what I expected, but I imagine the word count limit might have hindered you some.

You did a great job keeping my attention right to the end. I want to know so much more, like why the man was so angry he vandalized the church. Keep writing. You have great stories to tell.
You told an interesting story, but it felt incomplete. I too want to know why the vandal was so angry. I think this should be a much longer story, but your dialogue and descriptions were realistic.