The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a beautiful poem. At first I read it as desperate soul, then suddenly I realized it was desolate soul and it sent chills done my back.

There was a tiny typo in the second stanza it should be see your eyes.

But the message was clear and eloquent and touched me deeply.
What a lovely poem!
You have a comforting message in this and stayed very faithful to Psalm 139. I love your title. Nice work.
Very thought provoking and true to scripture. Should be an encouragement to all the desolate souls who read it.
Excellently represents the Scripture--Good work
Great message from one of the most powerful chapters in the Bible. Thanks for sharing.
Speaks to the reader and makes them think. Very enjoyable. keep writing.

Congratulations for placing in the top 15 of your level!
Inspiring and from one of my favorite chapters! Fantastic writing!
Yes, it's so comforting to know that our Father knows all about us and wants us to rest in His love.
Congratulations Christine on such a fine entry. I am so proud of you, This is such a beautiful picture of God longing to hold us in His forgiving arms.