The Official Writing Challenge
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Had a bit of trouble following this, but you certainly have some good imagery in here. Thanks so much for sharing!
An interesting piece, however I didn't think the word flowed as well as they could have.
Had some good thoughts in this. I think readability would be helped through a little more attention to punctuation and fleshing out the thoughts. Expand a little on some of the thoughts you have here. You have a lot more words you can use. Thanks for sharing this with us.