The Official Writing Challenge
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For what it's worth, you totally grabbed my heart with everything you had to say. Definitely sounds like you are walking, breathing and living through some trials. Add to that, being 3000 miles from home and I have to hand it to you for such a great testimony of "how not to give up" while the heats on. Good Job!
It is so exciting to ask God to show you something, we consider small, we pray and blam...a light bulb goes on and we are led right to it. We share some of the same WOW moments. :)
Ooops, forgot...if you double space between each paragraph, it makes it easier to read :)
Wonderful testimony--thanks for sharing it!

I wonder if it'd be better to "hook" your readers by moving the story to the beginning, and then providing the lesson at the end.

Very interesting story, especially in these difficult times. I hope it will inspire others in similar circumstances.