The Official Writing Challenge
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This was interesting, but the many "Phew's" were a little distracting.
I liked how you drew from personal experiences when using the topic word however I think "maybe" only using 1 or 2 and putting in more detail about each would not feel like jumping around so much.
You have some great ideas here on resignation and relief. Sometimes, just focusing on one or two concepts makes a more concise, easier to read piece.