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By Carol Cook
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What was even more exciting was the addition of a new library. For years I had dreamed of a room where I could sit and be surrounded by books. I couldn’t believe it was really here. When I had told the carpenters how many shelves I wanted they looked at me with a question in their eyes and said, “That will hold a lot of books.” I had a lot of books.
After the sawdust was cleaned, the curtains were hung and the books were placed on the shelves, my daughter and I retired to the library for a well-deserved story time. We sat in the big, comfortable, overstuffed chair preparing for the story, but she had some very important questions, first.
“Mommy, is God in our new house?”
“Yes, God is in our house,” I told her.
“Is He in my new room?”
“Yes.”
“Is He here, in the new library?”
“Of course. God is everywhere,” I explained.
“Is He in the closet?”
“Ye-es, He’s in the closet,” I replied wondering where this conversation was going.
“What’s He doing in the closet?”
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In the section of dialog at the end, there should be a blank line after each speaker's bit of conversation, even though they are very short.
I loved your punchline.