The Official Writing Challenge
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I loved this piece. Very well done. I do not think you belong in the "beginner" catagory. In my opinion, your writing is polished enough to advance to the next level. Great job!
Ugh! I know how you feel! I absolutely can't wait for winter to end and the warmth of spring to surround me. I greatly enjoyed your encouragment to stop grumbling long enough to be thankful for what we have - plenty of food, warm houses, even the beauty of snow. A great reminder to count our blessings. Thanks!
I feel for you, as we have escaped snow for many years by coming to Arizona, but I love your attitude. After all, the attitude about snow is in the mind or eye of the beholder. A very good description of a Christian battle to face things as they are, and see the happy side. Good job!
Well written. Keep up the good work.
I'm SOOO with you on the snow!

I really liked the pacing and the voice in this little gem.
Very nice flow, and a very encouraging message. Good job!