The Official Writing Challenge
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Obviously had no wings to have come such a cropper, I liked your unusual (I don't know what to call it) piece. Thanks for sharing - Colin
P.S. Definitely quirky!
Whimsical and fun.keep writing! Blessings,Ruth
How lovely!

I wanted just another stanza or two, to show the Fairy's remorse for not heeding the warnings.

I've started a class in the FaithWriters forums for Beginner and Intermediate writers. I'd love to see you there--look for "Jan's Writing Basics".

This is an outstanding poem, rich in imagery and fine word choices.
Neat story! :) Congratulations on your placing 13th in your level. (You can see the placing on the forums.)
Keep on writing!