The Official Writing Challenge
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11/06/09
This is very educational, I have been in many forms and discussions, lead through quotes so we could expressing yourself.
11/09/09
You give us something more to look forward to in heaven: a white that is whiter than anything we think is white here on earth. It seems like each paragraph stands on its own. Perhaps you coud work on transitions for a little better flow. Keep up the good work.