The Official Writing Challenge
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08/25/05
Your article made much more sense after I read the last line explaning the definitions. If you would find a way to incorporate that into the first part of the writing and mingle it throughout the body it would be easier to understand. Once I understood where you were going I thought you made some good points. Thanks!
08/26/05
I agree, this was a very good article but maybe could have mentioned that this was definition 1,2,3 before the ending in preparation. I enjoyed reading. God bless ya, littlelight
I loved your last paragraph. There's definitely a message in here for us all! Thanks for sharing.
08/28/05
A fun entry :) nicely done