The Official Writing Challenge
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08/23/05
Very nice..I have had those same sentiments, and the Lord brings us back to the place he wants us to be, it seems we end up with a better view. Nice entry and poem. God bless ya, littlelight
A nice honor to Teen Challenge, I loved the poem you incorporated into this piece. As a whole it's is a good read and the poem could stand by itself.
08/24/05
Ka-pow! Oh, honey! Many, many can deeply relate to this story. Your writing is moving and I love the scrip from Psalms so much I'm going to find it now! Blessings!
This is involving and convincing. It commands the reader's attention and response. I like the way the poem shows up so naturally and seems a perfect fit! These are good thoughts, very reassuring. Well composed and constructed.
08/27/05
A touching story of forgiveness and redemption! wonderful!