The Official Writing Challenge
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The poignancy of this personal crisis, your family's personal crisis, decries any meaningful balanced attempts to adequately review. The events, as portrayed, choke under the restraint of 750 words. Only a novel's length would justly suffice. May I say this, however: please, please, keep entering these challenges; this reader must see more of your descriptive talent. Bryan. 10Jul09Fri.
The emotion in the writing is strong and draws the reader into this sad situation. I especially like the last paragraph.
This had to be difficult to write no matter what. I, too, want to encourage you to keep writing. You have a lot yet to give.
I stumbled upon your article and was very moved by the Holy Spirit to say thanks for sharing your life for the Kingdom of God! Keep attending the fields as the laborers are few and the harvest is over ripe!