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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Bitter and Sweet (05/28/09)
Today might be a mountain, but, I was born to climb.
So watch out you devils, you have but a short time.
They come to test me with trials and temptation.
I'll stand in the word no matter what situation.
My skin is tuff, my heart is strong.
Although everything may seem to be wrong,
With Christ inside me I can lasted so long.
Leaving all my troubles far behind.
No matter what it is, I was born to climb.
Don't move the mountain, God's joy is my strength.
I'll climb to the top no matter what the length.
Everything under the sun shall pass.
Only my works in Christ shall last.
I'll vow the vow, God paid the price.
All that I am will stay in Lord Christ.
God's word in my flesh wasn't easy to eat.
But in my mouth, His word are so sweet.
God's yoke is easy and his burden is light.
I put on His armor so I can fight.
I'll take them scorpion and stomp on its head,
And climb over all mountains until my flesh dead.
Them fiery darts the devil will shoot.
God's Spirit teach me to bare his fruit.
That is where I know Jesus will be,
Constantly controlling His Spirit in me.
All good things come down from above.
Nothing can separate me from God's love.
I know who I am that's why I can't stop.
I know that I will make it to the top.
When I get there, I would've perfected all things.
My fruit will be ripe, My leaves will be green.
Although it may seem like such a long time.
I'll always remember, "I was born to climb."
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Jeanne E Webster
06/07/09
A strong conviction to succeed indeed! Through God's strength. Very keen thoughts and pursuits.

Check on your spelling and punctuation marks; some editing needed there. A little polish on the meter of your piece will smooth it out for the reader.

Good article and attitude!
diana kay
06/11/09
i love the "life is a mountain but I am born to climb"
and
" I was born to climb.
Don't move the mountain, God's joy is my strength.
I'll climb to the top no matter what the length. "

some very good phrases in here. I think you might find it works smoother if you split the lines in half in most of them and to try some divisons into verses.
I enjoyed reading this and think it is an original idea