The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 531 times
Member Comments
Member
Date
Nice job, a smooth read, just one typo though. "willing" should be "Willingly" I think, right?

Good job, thanks for sharing.
The ultimate in bitter and sweet! Well said. You had a few words off... I find it helps to read it out loud to catch little things like that. I heard you heart in this. Thank you!
06/10/09
I like this! well done. A couple of suggestions instead of double spacing divide the peice up into two or three paragraphs.Thanks