The Official Writing Challenge
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oooh, very creative the way you used that line, "His death does seem both good and bad." You managed to put it first in the first line, then the second/third and fourth, all in four verses and still have it fit together. Great job! I'm impressed.
05/18/09
Jesus' death on the cross certainly hurts bad, yet brings forth good to all who believe. I like your poem very much because it speaks so deeply within and expresses what Christ's death means to us in our hearts.