The Official Writing Challenge
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Wonderful free verse! I hope you'll soon be moving to a higher level.
This poem is edgy and smart. What a great juxtaposition of Bethlehem's Christ against today's outrageous commercialism. You even managed to weave O.T. prophecy and N.T. fulfillment. You have a terrific way with words and a keen, creative edge. Brilliant.
I enjoyed this. You had a good mix of message and wit. Good job.
Regina, I just wanted to let you know that you did very well in the Challenge this week. Even though you didn't quite make it into the winners' circle, you made it into the highest rankings for Level 1, placing 13th for the level.

The competition is always quite intense in Level 1, so well done. Keep up the great writing.

If you would like to check the highest rankings for yourself, you can see them here:

With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)