The Official Writing Challenge
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This is very creative and has a great message.
Oh, spooky! Very unique take on the topic, and approach to your idea. Nicely done.
I liked the idea of the computer disc. It was a great idea. Retelling her story by telling it to Sam perhaps didn't work out so well. I think you could have actually written the story without him, or just brought him in right at the end.